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*Sail Boat*

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Albatros sailing
Ocean tossed, storm at sea
Feeling mal-de-mer.

2014 Delice1941
25th April2014
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Hi there! I've chosen you as the 34th person for my 200 Comments Project Challenge. Basically I'm giving comments to 200 different people in a time frame within a week :D (Big Grin)

Very beautiful and praise worthy. I see you have such a vast appreciation for water/the sea and it is depicted well in this haiku. The imagery sets such a pretty and peaceful picture in the reader's mind as they read it. I have never been sailing before but I imagine it to be a worthwhile and fun experience. Very nicely done :)