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Old eyes searched a haunted image
With hands that shook he touched his face
Fearful he felt translucent skin
Like cling film wrapped on bone
Humbled he asked 'Who is this stranger'

Wait!
I know this man I am sure I do
Time receded a blur
Friends from the past smiled in the bevelled mirror
With hesitant hand he touched yesterday.

Remembering, women with ivory shoulders
Pearls shimmering on beige lace
Red lips that kissed with ancient guile
Images teased his weary mind
While he searched his mirror for a forgotten face
'Who is this stranger'

2013 Delice1941
1st January2012
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All my work on DeviantArt belongs to me. This poem is protected and may not be used@2013

'Mirror Image' is again re-submitted. It has been accidently deleted twice. Am fond of this poem it was written some time ago now and managed to survived my waste paper basket.
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Mood: Love ~WalkinginDreamlight Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The imagery is sublime in its self-awareness of the central character.

Beautiful words that evoke nostalgic images of another time, as memories reflect the person he once was...

Thank you for sharing!
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:icondelice1941:
This was always one of my favourites, pleased you enjoyed reading 'Mirror Image' :rose:
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~juniorel Jan 17, 2013   Writer
Wow. This is just beautiful. And powerful. The subject is not one I often see dealt with here on DA, and you've done a remarkable job of it.
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:icondelice1941:
Many thanks, pleased you enjoyed :reading: 'Mirror Image'. Think it is one of my better efforts.
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~Gandalfgirl579 Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, this is gorgeous!
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:icondelice1941:
Thank you for :reading: and leaving comment. Pleased you enjoyed 'Mirror Image'.
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*Everlasting90 Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This provokes such haunting images.
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:icondelice1941:
Thank you for reading and leaving comment, pleased you enjoyed this poem.
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!DancingShadowLeaves Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely. :) Deep and beautiful.
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:icondelice1941:
Many thanks for leaving comment, pleased you enjoyed 'Mirror Image'.
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