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'All that glitters is not gold'
When I was young this was told
Have found it to be very true
So pass that thought on to you.

'Absence makes  heart grow fonder'
'Straight as an arrow' I fly
Letters all tied with ribbon red
Treasured words so often read.

'Always look on the bright side'
life will surely cast net wide
Luminous thought uplifting light
Gloom and doom serious blight.

'love conquers all' so very true
Should its pain have wounded you
Balm of forgiveness, feelings appleased
Love heals hurt, wishing godspeed.


2012 Delice1941
4th December2012

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Written for HEART-OF-POETRY :iconheart-of-poetry:Prompt Clichés

Happy Christmas and Best Wishes.
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=DragonsChest Dec 7, 2012  Professional Writer
First cliches, now catch phrases? It has been a delight to read your poetry this week Delice... :hug:
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:icondelice1941:
Many thanks for reading poems David, glad you enjoyed my efforts:santa:
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*lombregrise Dec 4, 2012  Professional Writer
:clap:
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:icondelice1941:
This poem turned out better than expected, so am pleased you enjoyed it :iconrbheartplz:
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*lombregrise Dec 5, 2012  Professional Writer
yes ! Good job :sun:
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=Wordeea Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
"Love heals hurt wishing godspeed." :heart: true

clichés are cliché because they are true :)

great job on this !
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:icondelice1941:
Just read this again, popped back and put comma after hurt. Oh...puncuation! Yes I agree, have no problems with using the odd cliché, so I was quite comfortable writing this poem about them:rose:
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=Wordeea Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i think that the search for something that is not cliché ends up being cliché ;)
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:icondelice1941:
Perhaps it is like writing, all has been done before, the trick now is to be original.
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